Persistence
As I chased my shadow in the darkness,
I slipped and fell through the elevator door,
And I have lived here ever since.
Everything stays the same in here,
As we go up and down the tower.
At an arbitrary floor we stop for a while,
To let summer flies inside.
They are welcome to stay,
Hum to the tune of the disenchanted fan,
That breathes out a wind of monotony,
In a black and white persistence.
Beside me is a board of buttons,
Like happy faces that smile at each other.
Each one speaks a different dialect,
Of a foreign language,
But I am sure they say the same thing.
Above the board the speaker coughs and sputters,
The same song over and over again.
Even when I question the speaker I get,
The same words, the same sounds,
Through dayish night or nightish day.
The light shines with a bored brightness,
And if you stare at it for hours,
Shapes lose their shape,
And sizes lose their size.
The floor plunges to an abysmal depth,
And the ceiling jumps to an unimaginable height.
It is then that I hear the knock on the door,
Of the stranger waiting outside.
Within the elevator, I exist,
Locked and trapped in measured space.
He always waits outside.
10 comments:
"It is then that I hear the knock on the door,
Of the stranger waiting outside.
Within the elevator, I exist,
Locked and trapped in measured space.
He always waits outside."
I love it! I love it! (Can I say that once more?)
I LOVE IT :-)
So Kafkaesque!
Have you ever dared to let that stranger in?
Tell me if you ever did.
wow! you so decided to post again?!
The pics are all lovely, as usual :-)
Hey! You are back! And on an elephant!
I like the tenth photo with the trees. It reminds me of an approach to a grand estate that existed a few centuries ago, where now, only the trees survive.
this is so much like a poem i wrote years back..the stranger, the elevator..the same words..freaky..just that in my case the stranger was God...duno if it makes any sense..if u read it, u wld...
Vasu:
I guess it is a bit Kafkaesque because of the hint of despair in it. I thought it wasn't good at all as I am writing after such a long hiatus. I am so glad you liked it :)
How:
Yes I finally found time ;) You know all about it.
Eric:
Elephant back seemed more appropriate for my grand come back.
That's from a tea garden actually. There might have been an idyllic tea estate house somewhere in the background.
No More:
I must have inherited some of your DNA (don't ask how as it is a P2C2E). That would prove all your theories :)
no, she's just lost..quarter life crisis :) what is a P2C2E???
btw, when's the erotica coming up?
A Process too Complicated to Explain (P2C2E) ;)
Courtesy Salman Rushdie...
Absolutely great one!
Your poems have such an energy and strength in them that they seem to stab in the face...love them for this...
The same for this one too...the despair hits...
Lovely pics too!
I wish I had travelled as much as you have....Today I just checked out your travellougues....in too blue a mood today to read anything serious..will check your poems and other posts tomorrow...that's a promise I have made to myself...:-)
Priyankari:
You make me feel like I just won the oscar :)
Thank you so much, but seriously I doubt if I am even half as good as that.
Shakhi:
You have no idea how much backlog I have. All the places I still need to write about!
Yes I am very passionate about traveling :)
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